Mickey Mantle

He was the fair-haired child of destiny,
Expressing with his bat what we were not.
He was Apollo as humanity,
The image made us an adoring lot.
We viewed our hero through the haze of hype,
His struggles with life mattered not at all.
We looked past reality to love the life
As myth, we wanted heroes standing tall.
Time winds its way deflecting magic dreams,
Too late we sought the wisdom we can know,
Wasted we our youth, we are mere gleams.
We felt the sunrise warmth, it gave no glow.
We searched for heroes that we could admire,
As icons, never did they light the fire.

Perhaps I am making strange connections

Immediately, I thought of blonde-haired cricketer, Shane Warne + Mickey Mouse hero with a twist! It all fitted very well! Even to the last lines, where heroes fade and somehow, with time, there is a level of souring because hero "human" images don't seem to weather well. But Mickey Mouse could be another story.

Love the possibility of layers in this poem! The thought of yoking wild boy Warny with epic formality provides wonderful satire.

Great write!

Smiles and Light
AuraGem

Poem

Mickey Mantle was a baseball player. I dont know what that does to your layers.

Dear Mickey

LOL! See what happens when your poetry goes international! Readers bring their own experiences to the poem and interpret it in that light!

Thanks for the info! But I still like my version! That's the beauty of poetry!

Smiles and Light
AuraGem

Shane Warne

I googled Shane Warne and he does remind me of Mickey Mantle.

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