Life
Life
Brutally, Harsh
triumphantly, beautiful
tragically, epic
imperfectly, perfect
indecisively, decided
lighted, misguided
unfortunately, fortunate
indirectly, blinded
lustfully, heartbroken
magically, blissful
amazingly, hopeful
courageously, listful
inexplicably, explained
confidently, secure
conservatively, humbled
Profoundly, Unsure.
--Nicole Tellone
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Hmmm
A series of contradictions and the occasional marriage of emotions was a short and easy read but I'm not sure that I felt totally fulfilled after its reading. If you are a novice poets trying your wings it is well done but not exceptional, if you are a seasoned poet it was a bit of a lazy exercise. I am not trying to be hypercritical of your work, just sharing my own random thoughts after the read.