My Favorite Wino

He staggers and swaggers in free form
Spent many lonely nights out in the storm

Old irish wine, he gulped with lust
As he sat with garbage cans in dust

Waved to the sparrows who sing every day
Smiled so tender and loving in every way

Without a tooth in his mouth or hair upon his head
Garbage can delights is his kitchen where fed

Never a sad moment as he begged for coins
As he met Jolly his friend who decided to join

They found Thursday's leftovers wrapped in tin foil
If they wait till Saturday it will give them a boil

The alleys are where all the old winos met
As they begged people for coins to place a bet

At the lotto Old Jolly and his friend RunamucK
Came up with some numbers, played for a buck

So when one lady came out to empty her can
The following day took the newspaper and ran

It seems that they had gotten the wining lotto number
No begging for a while, will wine and dine, then slumber

So once more, he staggers and swaggers in free form
Soon he will be as wet as a hot summer's day storm

My favorite wino, he will always be
Dear God, please help him be free!

I like this poem

First I want to thank you for the lovely comment you left me. I very rarely recieve compliments to my work, and I appreciate people like you, who are kind enough to recognise my work now and then. I truly do thank you.

As for the poem, I like your rhyming scheme and the character you have developed. I feel for this lonely wayward man, and in the end it feels as if I know him quite well.

Cheers!

-Epitome

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