Nature's Opera
Winter has come and left to claim
Victory upon the rugged earth's fame
White powdered snow and cold diamond ice
A painting of beauty can look so nice
Frozen ponds now thawing in spring
The earth now budding with the green
The sun's ambient warmer rays
Shine on so many spring days
As lighter coats and jackets are worn
Eggs in a nest hatch, as new life is born
Magic beams dance and gleam on the river's flow
It seems as if God is everywhere and let's us know
Bringing forth the wisdom and magic of love
New seasons descend upon the earth from above
Nature's opera of singing birds and buzzing bees
Through their wondrous eyes a God truly sees
His sublime gardens of the forests and city
Daiseys, mums, roses, and the cala lily
In full bloom with fragrant scents dashing in time
Isn't nature's opera something defintely sublime?
Listen to pretty birds sing, the robin, blue jay, and sparrow
He is singing through His birds, walk the straight and narrow
Hear the hooting of the wise old owl
I know God is watching as I do bow
Fish in the quiet stream and ducks in the pond
Dear Mother Nature waving her magic wand
A pack of gray wolves howl in the distant night air
Nature's opera conducted by God so fair
Hear the earth at sunrise
With God's sweet loving showers
Ballet of golden butterflies
Dancing on the garden flowers
As the music of nature continues
Colors of love do bloom in virbrant hues
As a new morning star so shines upon
Awakening a symphony at dawn
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How?
How in the world do you create such wonderful pieces? I have said so before, and I will say it again because it amazes me, you order your words brilliantly! Not many people quite realize the art to ordering words in poerty--it's not easy, and it makes the poem. One word in the wrong place can throw the whole thing off. You have mastered this talent. Not only that, but the message was meaningful and fantastically displayed. Thank you for lightening my heart and making my day.
Peace does exist in this world; it just takes poetry to remind us that it's there.
wInTeR rOsE
Comment: Winter Rose
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Just want to thank you for the words of praise that you gifted my poem
"Nature's Opera" with! You have given my heart a tingle and your
message was much like getting a beautifully wrapped package
on Christmas day. I want to thank you again!
My pleasure
It was my pleasure to read your writing. Thank you for your kind words in reply, I am please I had that effect on you! The poem deserves all the credit it receives.
Love is your hearts choosing of another heart to bond with.
wInTeR rOsE
Nice
Very nice, but the grammar distracts from the poem.
Example:
The sun's ambient warmer rays
Shines on so many spring days
This takes me out of the poem and makes me scratch my head, whereas:
The sun's ambient warmer rays
Shine on so many spring days
Would flow and allow me to be lost in your poem. Rays shine. A single ray shines. It is a beautiful piece, and with the little grammatical issues corrected, will be a great piece.
Nicely work :)
David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com
To Mr. Young
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
You are absolutely correct and I appreciate your correction as
I missed that when I read through it! I will read through it again
to find more of the same! I apreciate and thank you for reading
my work!
In my days of dispair, it's
In my days of dispair, it's so nice to read such a heart warming
story!