Never Heard These Words Before
Does anyone hear, the words I share?
Ours is a love, so sweet and rare!
When you touch my heart now I feel,
The words of your love just until,
Next time we touch again I hear...
The words of love, does mean your near.
Oh! Stronger than the night before,
Run to me when I open the door!
Never to say goodbye, we touch,
Oh! This beauty, that means so much!
As tomorrow returns once more,
The words of love, mean so much more!
As we laugh and love together,
Our love is now and forever!
Never heard these sweet words before
Stronger now, when I open the door...
The love and thoughts we always share,
Changing, growing, giving love's care!
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oldaspirationsneverdie...7 Lately, I haven't gotten many reviews!
So I'm going to review my own poem...I like this write as it is
dedicated to two close friends of mine, Debra and Ann! Two
women that I love very much, who don't know how much I've
cared for them. Known both for years and the words come
as each time I see either, I love both even more as we
speak of our love for each other, (I'm not married, or engaged
but that's how I feel about them) Don't know if they really know
it, but I know they care about me and I about them. Marriage
is not possible for me, that isn't a goal of mine! But, I will
always love them!
Nice
I loved it! It has a nice rhythm, and a nicer message.
Keep it up:)
Poetically Pathetic