She Just Couldn't Be Mine
Who is she, the lady at the door?
Standing, waiting the one I adore
My buddy was her choice I knew
She'd never choose me, I so blue
The color of the sky, I dream!
When she said yes, now we're a team!
Always there pretty, at the door
Citadel of love I do adore
In her glory, she gives me success
To be her man and mate, nothing less
We join together in love with a song
Blue birds and robins sing on our lawn!
As I open the door to our found dream
In love's touch, two hearts do beam
I once thought she couldn't be mine
Always at my door her love I find
For when the winter cold is born
She's the heat that keeps me warm!
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A Real Sweet Write!
This is such a gentle piece. I love how you introduce the Robin and Blue bird. I love the nature aspect to it, and more of my writing is beggining to draw on these things aswell.
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Deborah
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OAND,
I also have the love of my life now with me and I adore her as you do your"Citadel of love " she fans the flames of desire that keeps us both warm on the coldest of lifes days and nights
great piece
cute
This is really cute, and sweet for your girl. I like the way you add the blue bird and the robins, it's a smooth transition, very nice!
~angelia~