The Color White

One of my many color poems...

-White-

White is the Color of Jesus Christ
So pure and free of sin
White is the color of rgitheousness
Worthy of praise
White is the color of an eyeball
Looking into the sky
White is the color of snow
Melting as the summer nears
White is th color of wind
Blowing through your hair
White is color of air
The air that gives us life
White is the color of paper
How we express or feelings
White is the color of being pure
Just like God
White is the color of a plastic bag
For your own convienence
White is the color satan hates
It will destroy him

Please, critize, one of my first poems and need criticism.
Thanks!

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PART TWO
WHITE
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The Color of the World
The color of the world is hope.
And white for white is the absence of all the colors combined the color inside a piece of lightening inside the actual thing the wondrous peril of the striking bolt
The color of GOD.
White is the color of hope
The color of the world is white
Some people in a war zone fight
When they wear white clothing and wave white flags they are surrendering they do not expect to be shot but sometimes the opposing forces murder on the spot
Then there is no hope not even for those people that remain for they are not GOD or even white they are just waiting for the flame to strike the lightening bolt of GOD.
The color of the World is white.

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