put a star on it
i bobbed my head to the tune
stuck in my head.
one line repeating
over and over.
we giggle as we eat
toasted cheese.
shaffer's cookies fill our tummies
on birthdays.
the nun watches us through
the creepy stalker window.
staring,
glaring.
gab's bag of mashed up food
explodes.
laughter erupts.
we clean before art woman
finds us.
being yelled at for climbing
on each other's backs.
put a star on it, fool!
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I Really Like This Write
Random, yet so interesting to read. Its almost like an insert from a book, or even a script. And im just left wanting to know more. Great use of description and great write!
Debs
thanks, man
thanks for your comment. i was aiming for random etc. so, your comment worked =]
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