never
With a soul so dark and a broken heart tears fall from her eyes. can't anyone see the pain she is in. with know one to love or believe in her she walks the shadows alone. She wonders why people can't love her for who she is. She has lost everyone and everything she has ever loved. As her heart breaks once more she wonders if this is how edger Allen Poe felt when he quoted the raven never more. As she ran those thoughts through her mind. She said I will never more be in fear. I'll never more be scared. I will never more be alone. And I will never more worry about not being loved.beacuse I am never more.
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Never
'She has lost everyone and everything she has ever loved'
Beautiful, powerful. \thankyou for sharing this peice.
Deborah
Nice
This is quite well done; it could be a nice tribute to Edgar Allen Poe's famed "The Raven." I would use a few more descriptive and mood-inducing words, in order to make this more effective; just keep fiddling around and editing, and this could be an exceptional poem. Love the concept; I'd like to read more of your work.
-Epitome