Lakeside Leaf

Like a hand
Stretching
Down
To a placid Lake,

A Willow Leaf
On the tip
Of a branch
Reaches out

Gently
Breaking
The surface;

Ripples radiate

Creating
Ever expanding circles
Until
Eventually

They kiss

The lakeshore.

A tender token
From
A little
Insignificant Leaf.

Gentle...

A very peaceful and gentle write poetmaster. Really good use of description in this one, for it built up a wonderful image in my head. One of my favourites of yours so far.

DEbs

wow

A favourite, you're so kind. Yes, it is so peaceful. Thanks. :-)

kind of like the chaos

kind of like the chaos theory, hummingbird's wings causing a hurricane

Ripples

certainly have an effect, especially in Life. Well observed. Lovely comment. Cheers.

nice

nice

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