I'm not sure I totally get his one, but it is definitely a bit different than most haikus. I have actually never used that medium- too restricted.
Keep on wiritng, o master of poetry!
loni balogna

I would have to guess that if the heart is rescued the rest of the body would have to follow with it. Rescue completed!!!!

Jolly good,

Pete

this is why the site is great,the poems are good,the comments too are strangely good