October Gold

Like crunchy cornflakes
Underfoot, rustling gold leaves -
Beauty in decay.

superb!!

I love this one poetmaster
great visual...makes me miss fall already and its only begun
Linda
:)

:-)

Get crunching! thanks for reading.

clever

and true. The brown leaves look like that piled up. Great haiku, loved the end with the decay. raskin

yes

the thought of "beauty" in decay amazes me, because anything man-made isn't beautiful in decay, quite the opposite.
thanks for reading.

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