Oil on Water

Posted June 13th, 2008 by poetmaster

Beside a gutter
A liquid rainbow
Slowly swirls.

A single raindrop

Falls

And disturbs

Causing confusion of colour

Until

A quasi-balance resumes.

On June 13th, 2008 raskin says:

Great images, good illustration of life out of balence and then returning to it. raskin

On June 17th, 2008 loni balogna says:

I think you could have been more descriptive with the colors and reflections of the rainbow. But overall, I like it

loni balogna

On June 17th, 2008 poetmaster says:

Thanks for tip. I intended it to be a short piece, but will remember for future creations. Cheers :-)

On June 28th, 2008 mimi says:

nice,your poetry is a great discovery

On June 28th, 2008 poetmaster says:

How kind! Appreciation at last. This site is a great discovery too! :)

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