Rachel's Empathy

A raindrop falls
From a sullen sky,
A teardrop trickles
From her tender eye,
A snowdrop wakes
From its bed of snows,
Compassionate words
From her heart flows.

As wet as that rain
Or this Woman’s tears,
Both sound like music
To angelic ears.
As white as pure snow
Or her words of love,
Both melt pleasingly
‘Neath the feet of the Dove.

A fledgling sparrow
Fallen from its nest,
An earthquake is felt
Deep within her breast.
A helpless orphan child
In a basket does lie,
She comes to its rescue
In aid of every cry.

Weak is that bird,
As weak is her heart,
She feels its pain
Almost tear her apart.
As alone as that babe
She knelt and prayed
Asking her Father
For His loving aid.

Beautifully written. =)

Beautifully written. =)

Thank You

Thanks for great comment.

I loved this one

a great write Poetmaster full of heartfelt compassion, a truly beautiful poem hugs from Willow

i loved writing it

So pleased it touched you. I know the first two stanzas off by heart, It's only one a few of my poems that i can do this.It was one of those "Eureka!" moments. I'm sure you know what i mean. Cheers again. :-)

Paul

loved it

loved it

Comment viewing options

Select your preferred way to display the comments and click "Save settings" to activate your changes.