Rose Petals

Posted June 11th, 2008 by poetmaster

Half-kissed

Pink petals

Lay

Crumpled

On the cold
Marble floor.

A solitary tear drops.

A sad emblem
Of what should have been…

On June 11th, 2008 ErgoIgoUgo2 says:

Paul,

The inate sadness of this piece encompassed me and made me feel the pain of loss.

Write on,

Pete

On July 1st, 2008 mimi says:

Beautifully expressed,you have done it again

On July 1st, 2008 poetmaster says:

Your comments are like the scent of a rose - sweet, and uplifting. (taking a bow) I thank you. :)

On July 2nd, 2008 joyce says:

dying beauty meeting cold reality, you say it beautifully. Thanks for another lovely poem. joyce

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