The unspoken truth you might not want to hear.

The unspoken truth you might not want to hear.

Empathy is owed to those
Striving so hard to achieve.
In the name of the knowledge,
From some too expensive college,
They have gladly paid to receive.

O’ how so very, very sad,
No matter what, they strive to achieve.
In spite of all the knowledge, they receive.
They still do not know
To God, one must go,
If we want to have wisdom.

not too sure about this one,

not too sure about this one, it reads a bit stilted... i would work a bit on the rhythm if I was you

Ms. Manson ,one of those college types you just spoke about.

Good work preacher 1st.
The Ranger salutes you.

apology

well, we're all allowed to voice our opinions. but i do apologise for sounding too harsh. i got stuck on your subject matter and took it out on your structure etc. apologies.

Attention - Please do not distrub the sleeping alter ego

Quiet, my alter ego is asleep. (Ha hA HAaaaaah cough sigh Huh?)

These poems that I hid here are not even worth posting.

preacher1st

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