UNSURE!
The hurt and deceit
built the wall.
The pain and sorrow,
keep it strong.
My efforts keep control,
but my heart loses,
And, everytime the kindness begins,
it wears thin,
And the wall crumbles...
19/07/2002
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Well written
Well done. I can relate to this feeling. This is short but very powerful and created such a strong emotion in me. I especially like the first 4 lines. Take care.
THANK YOU
RaaZ THANKS FOR THE KIND WORDS...HOPE YOU SAW WHAT I DID...;)
yes this is good
yes this is good
THANKS
RaaZTHANK YOU ....ITS INTERESTING TO KNOW WHAT PEOPLE THINK OF YOUR POEMS....ONE GETS A DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE...:)