Abandoned Aphid

Riding the city bus, I Looked
down and saw the stickly green
sucker - possibly displaced
from make-up flowers or house-bound plant.

Seemingly struggling with it’s wings;
struggling like I do sometimes
with mine. I wondered how it would
fare, this broken tanker, fallen:

steering west across my legs;
clinging to my dry sea
of cotton - every crease a wave
each crossed-stitch a current.

- May 2007

Steering West..

Across my legs. Love it, and I love the poem aswell.
Well written and interesting.

Great user name by the way!

Debs

Hey Debs,

thanks for your comments, much appreciated. I was quite happy with that line when it came to me as I scratched my head. I can't take credit for the user name though, I'm afraid - it's pinched from the amazing UK TV comedy show "The Day Today".

Cheers,

Mike.

Wicked!!

Great show, have it on dvd!

I cant remember that line though.

Debs

The headlines.

It was one of the bizarre spoof headlines they used to have; like "Boy made of paint wins bi-election", "'Sorry!' Yells exploding cleaner", "and, where now for boy raised by puffins?".

Pure poetry :)

Mike.

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