Not a Poem

This is not a poem.
Poems have to rhyme.
Just because the line are short,
and the script is tight,
Does not make this
A poem.

Laugh

This--well, I would say poem, but it's obviously not one, is it?--piece of literature, then, made me laugh. I really liked it! Nice job!
wInTeR rOsE

huh?

gracias! tanks

you lie, you lie, oh how you lie

Not only do poems not have to rhyme, but you even had an off-rhyme in the non-poem. the words rhyme and tight have a long i sound!!! You have assonance! muhahahahaha! Not a poem...sure...

Not bad with the irony, though. Makes it moderately amusing.

o-kay

happy i amuse you

also, i know poems dont have to rhyme,
thats why i made this one

so...

you admit it then! It IS a poem? aha!? Sorry, this is confusing. Its either weird and arty, or it is total crap. Either way, it is weird and arty. lol.

so?

i just like the randomness

Oohh :D

Haha. This made me laugh too. ^^
I like it. It's short and sweet!
It is to a poem! :P

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