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circles gliding near

Posted August 4th, 2008 by raskin

leaves fallen still red
gaze at the seasons years pass
calm warmth beckons cold
tranquil cattails grow taller
eagle circles gliding near

Hot Damn Sister

On August 4th, 2008 ErgoIgoUgo2 says:

For a first timer I think this is freakin fantastic. How about that, we're spreading our wings and soon we'll be soaring.

Your fellow rookie pilot,

Pete

thanks skipper

On August 4th, 2008 raskin says:

I'm going to be counting syllables now, crazy. I think I like these though. gilligan

Where have you been hiding?

On August 5th, 2008 dolanf says:

This is gorgeous, great imagery

Thanks, Raskin

Dolan

thanks

On August 6th, 2008 raskin says:

this is a new style for me so I'm trying it out, stretching. I'm trying to learn to follow the guidelines it isn't easy for me. raskin

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On August 5th, 2008 clairejane says:

hi,
i like the way you put the words together.
i become interested in tanka.
please write more...

clairejane

thanks for reading

On August 6th, 2008 raskin says:

and commenting, feedback is nice. raskin

beautiful autumn tanka, raskin...

On August 6th, 2008 joyce says:

Your poem describes the loveliness of that season (which I hate to think of approaching so quickly!) Very nice.

joyce

Thanks joyce,

On August 6th, 2008 raskin says:

each season is so different, it is interesting trying to express myself in a format. It's like working a puzzle of ideas or idea and conforming the words to fit. raskin

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