A crow lounges

The stream divided the field,
meandering through,
cutting one edge from the other.
Boxwoods, elders and willows
lined the slopes,
dead grass hung over the ledge,
lightly touching the water
as it coursed by.
Water moved between the banks
over field stones,
thrown in long ago,
logs cross to the other edge
at intervals.
I sit beside the brook
lingering.
A crow lounges in the tree
on the other side,
watching,
waiting.

loved this one raskin

I love the way you describe every detail in your poems I feel as though I am there seeing all the little things you describe so well great poem raskin.
takes me there from Willow

Thanks

It is nice to imagine those soft breezes, warmth, sun, sitting next to a stream, thinking. raskin

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