Dance of the spirits

The night is dark beyond my fire,
cool, moist spring air.
I am in a circle of light, sitting
with my back against a rock,
it is hard, I know.
Yet it's a comfortable place to be
stuck in for the night.
Looking closely the flames undulate
with the light breeze,
releasing wisps of smoke
into the sky, the stars
light the smoke as it rises.
Smoke coils, weaving, entwining
around as it raises into the heavens,
I watch thinking of it as a
dance of the spirits,
as they worship all the elements,
air, water, fire, earth.
This night it's all here.

reply for dance of the spirits blog by raskin

Willow
loved this one raskin a great description of fire one of the great elements well written thanks for sharing it

very spiritual...

oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Gee, this poem is beautiful and uplifting as I seem to be
out there with nature watching the spirit rise in smoke and
finding a new beauty that life has to offer! Like your
imagery and your phrasing, both have magic and
magnitude!

(Could you review one of my recent posts? Thank you!)

Thanks for reading and commenting

I like watching fires I think they can be mesmerizing and magical. raskin

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