Darts I love
Concentric circles on the wall
projectiles picked up
careful aim
steady wrist
squinting to pick
the right aim
to hit the heart
without fail
without miss
going back
coming forward
letting go
as it flies in the air
a smile
yes
a direct hit
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Raskin
You've obviously got better aim than I do.
Pete
No
sometimes it's a hit sometimes it's a miss. raskin
a game of the heart...
writing poetry is like this, too. We try so hard to aim well and hit peoples' hearts. Sometimes it's a hit, sometimes a miss. You usually hit, raskin.
joyce
Thanks Joyce,
I wrote this so the interpretation could be taken in a few different ways. It was a fun one to write. raskin