Gossamer
At the center
there is light,
rays extend
in all directions,
a compass
guiding,
the glow
burns with
a luminosity,
brilliance
is felt
through
solids,
electricity
emanates
energy,
the light
hums,
in the iris
it burns
contemplation,
thought,
ideas,
a gossamer
passing through
space,
to set on my
hand.
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Gossamer
Subtlety used magnificently.
Ngaio
thank you
thank you for your kind words
A great choice of words...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
I like your descriptive language! Enjoyed each word as you create a
good energy and flow of words! (Please drop by to review one of my
poems)
thanks a lot
I have a lot of fun thinking this stuff up.