Great Expanse
Standing at the shore looking over a great expanse
the water calmly caresses the shore.
Night is receding at my back
dawn is breaking on the horizon
as I look ahead.
Crouching next to the lake
I put my hands in to feel the water.
It's cold, clear the rocks look like jewels
under the water, I pick one up
feel the weight, throw it.
The rock splashes disrupting
the calm sending out ripples in all directions.
The ripples hit the shore and my hands
I wave my hands back and forth under
the water, stirring up the sand
in between the rocks,
the water becomes cloudy in front of me.
I have to wait now
be still
for clarity to return.
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I adore water images in poetry
The liquid feelings in this poem are quite dramatic! Love the metaphorical twists!
AuraGem
Yea
We come from water and return to it for comfort, inspiration. Thanks for reading and commenting. raskin