Limbic

Covering distance and time,
reviving something primordial,
an indelible mark deep within him.
The sirens song rested in his limbic cave,
wasn't really a song,
more vibration,
a beat
felt more than heard.
It was music he listened to
years ago
he had escaped from
thinking it was gone
for good,
except in the dreams.
Was it the cold waters
of that inland sea,
magnifying the sound,
converting it to those primal emotions,
making him susceptible
to her song,
her memory.
Subtle reverberations
loosening
the sand under his feet,
sinking with ease
into those waters,
into that bliss.

Raskin

I really enjyed this piece, it was well written and well paced.

I always looked forward to our exchanges and just because you don't consider me a buddy anymore does not mean that I'll no longer read and comment on you stuff.

Pete

Themes

Thanks Pete, I have themes and this is one of them. This is related to Song and Laughing in the lagoon also one other. It was a fun piece of fantasy to write. raskin

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