porridge vs stew
Portia sat looking at the pease meal porridge,
perhaps she would wait,
wondering.
Cornmeal, oats, cream
steaming gruel,
set aside to cool a bit.
Looking out the window she thought,
time a funny thing to think of
but she never seemed
that far from musing about it.
Birds outside the window
gathered grains, seeds
they seemed so busy.
Trees swayed some,
leaves shimmered,
she loved the quaking aspen,
the movement fascinated her.
Clouds caught her eye as they moved
coalesced, parted, dissipated,
coming together again in another spot.
She continued to watch
as she picked up her spoon
eating the porridge.
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Daydreaming over porridge
Raskin,
You often amaze me in how you structure your poems in such a manner that we go from looking at the bowl of porridge to the division of clouds. Well written and enjoyable my friend.
I'm surprised and disappointed that you evendently didn't like Sally and Sully get Stewed since it was inspired by you love of alliteration.
Pete
Thanks
Pete for commenting. I like this one it's just about thinking. I make it a policy to avoid commenting on explicit poems no matter the alliteration. raskin
Fair Enough
raskin,
I was not aware of your sensibilities and I can repect that.
Pete
thank you
raskin