Screech of the owl
The fire crackles and pops
as another log is laid on.
I sit in the glow comfortable
in my big chair.
Warmth emanates
into the room.
A shadow passes
by the window, briefly
I see it, a glance only.
Silence but for the fire,
it seems to expand
and contract.
The shadow a whisper
from outside, quiet.
A mouse scurries past the fire
as though being chased.
In the tree I hear the screech
of the owl.
I get up to make my meal.
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good one raskin
I like this one raskin it draws me in to it ,I could vividly see you and the shadows by the comfort of your log fire you speak, of and hear the screech of the owl as he spots the mouse,only to remind you it was time to eat well done ,
you have created a great scene thankyou for the sharing it.
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owl theme
going on here, so I thought I would add mine. I'm glad you liked it. raskin