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Snip the strings

Posted January 30th, 2008 by raskin

Snip the strings one by one
watch as each snaps
like a fly fishing line
over a crystal clear river.
Each line in turn, floating
free to the clouds,
blue sky.
Freedom
to be.

Very Montalean. I liked this

On February 10th, 2008 McMongrel says:

Very Montalean.
I liked this very much.
A curious image that the strings that bind us also gain their freedom when we gain ours.
McMongrel

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On February 10th, 2008 raskin says:

Yes, an emotional release, tension released. Thanks for commenting. raskin

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