Song
Mother taught me to always whisper,
keep my song in my mind,
she told me,
one day I would know
when I could release my voice.
Each morning waking to the music
of the birds,
I would sit at my window
silently greeting the dawn,
inhaling the morning dew,
the scents and songs
began my day on the island.
On many sunny days
I would go out to pick berries
and flowers for breakfast,
I listened to the music
all around me,
the sound of the leaves rustling,
the shake of the dune grass.
I rested on the dunes in the warm sand,
watching as the waves rolled in,
the ships went by, slowly,
the sailors stood at the rail
watching,
for what I didn't know.
They would pass
Mother whispered to me
that I did well to keep silent.
I would smile at her, she smiled back.
She was beautiful.
Our days went by much as that one,
I grew in all different ways,
filling my Mother with pride
for her daughter.
One day I looked at my Mother
and smiled, she knew
as mothers do.
I stood on the dune and
my song took flight
on the currents,
sailing out across the water.
Heard by one,
I watched as he washed up on the shore
standing he smiled.
I smiled back quietly.
She had taught me to take care on releasing my song,
and I did.
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beautiful Raskin
I really enjoyed this one Raskin a great story I suspect a lot of thought went into that one, I think it was one of the best poems I have read, a great insight well witten from Willow
Agreed
I agree with Willow, this is great. The realtionships we have with our mothers are unique, as is this poem.
Thank you
to both of you. I had this one rumbling around my brain for the past couple of weeks, good that it finally came out. My Mom was great, I told her everything I wanted to say to her when she was alive, she knew exactly how I felt about her and why. She guided me quite a bit and I really needed it. raskin
I agree with the others, raskin
The first part of your poem reminded me of a picute I haven't seen in years. I wonder where it is? It is sepia toned, so very old, and shows a young girl at a window looking at a bird on a tree limb. It is beautiful like your poem. Thank you, raskin.
joyce