stones

Water ran down the side of the hill
the cedars stood as sentinels
protecting the stones and boulders
guarding as though something precious
was to happen.
The rocks glistened in the rain.
Exposed jewels sparkled in the stones
that had cracked open.
I collected them in my basket along with
the whole ones, each one beautiful.
I was lost in all the color,
that's when I saw him standing there
on his arrival, smiling.
The cedars and pines stood behind him
he was illuminated against them,
he was wet from the rain.
I met his eyes,
smiled,
I knew where he came from.

Stones

Loved it...
Very creative. Excellent imagery.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.

thanks

I had fun imagining it.

Hi

What an excellent imagination, so well worded I could actually see the rocks glistening. Very well done. Angel

We just love poetry
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oops

You should have seen the rocks when they opened up, oops I shouldn't have said anything. raskin

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