the fall

lips brushed subtlety
whisper quietly in my ear
hair rests on my neck
feathers float smoothly then land
caress the fall lovingly

"Bewtiful"

Nice Tanka Raskin »BRYCE

thanks for the comment

I appreciate it. raskin

Lovely Raskin

This is a lovely poem of the fall,autumn surely is a beautiful season hugs from Willow

thanks willow

for reading and leaving such a nice comment. Fall is beautiful. raskin

such a lovely

poem... i enjoyed each line.
Claire

Thank you claire

I'm glad you enjoyed it. raskin

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