the fall
lips brushed subtlety
whisper quietly in my ear
hair rests on my neck
feathers float smoothly then land
caress the fall lovingly
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lips brushed subtlety
whisper quietly in my ear
hair rests on my neck
feathers float smoothly then land
caress the fall lovingly
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I like nonesense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities. Dr. Seuss(1904-1991)
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thanks for the comment
I appreciate it. raskin
Lovely Raskin
This is a lovely poem of the fall,autumn surely is a beautiful season hugs from Willow
thanks willow
for reading and leaving such a nice comment. Fall is beautiful. raskin
such a lovely
poem... i enjoyed each line.
Claire
Thank you claire
I'm glad you enjoyed it. raskin