Unbound

Born without hooks to attach the strings,
learned to walk by flippity, flopping.
The puppeteer was dismayed,
placing me in the back of the closet.
Staying in there watching through
the cracked door, learning to mimic.
Hobbling out at night in the moonlight,
moving my arms and legs in an
elaborate dance to the music of silence.
All the puppets with hooks
now watched me as I moved, freely.
Unbound, vibrant pirouettes, bowing
when the sun finally came up
to the silent stares and stillness
of the bound.

good poem raskin

I enjoyed your poem raskin about a puppet great thought and imagination a story with a differance well written ,
from Willow

thankyou

I was driving home from work and started thinking about this, thanks for reading. raskin

imaginative with a symbolic confidence

I enjoyed this poem as it transcends from reality while exposing it from an imagintive mind with creative abilities nice work. Apologies if any misinterpretations were made upon this poem, for i am not a poet but enjoy reading ones that stimulate the mind on different levels, apart from logic.

thankyou

Thankyou for reading and commenting. This is my hobby that I enjoy and if someone else enjoys it I think that is very nice. I'm glad you saw different levels. I like letting my imagination go and sometimes I have a great time expressing it. raskin

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