up then down

Twila twittered as she twisted
on the teeter totter,
creating turbulence.
Ted turned this way then that,
in turmoil by the tussle of torque
created by Twila.
Twila twinkled making
Ted twitch tremendously,
together they were totally
topsy turvy as they tossed
up then down.

:)

I enjoy poems like this...you do a wonderful job with them... read it aloud but I keep getting stuck at "Twila twinkled making"...I need a new tongue LOL...

- heaven

another good one Raskin

another good tongue twister,well thought out loved it from Willow

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