first try

i came looking for myself
and what i found was
it will take more than a website
it will take more than words
it will take more than images
it will take more than words
it will take more than song
if i don't learn to love
it will take all that i am

the first tries are the hardest

gypsy-switched
When you look for yourself, look under the bushes as you always hide, when you look for yourself, look under other peoples bushes as you always leave a part of yourself there, when you look for yourself, look for the divine.

cool

Your subject is "non sense" lol.

Good poem, anyway! I like simple and to the point lines.

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