(updated 03/16/08)My dream vacation

( I am stuck and I really need help. I attempting to paint a picture with words of a vacation spot so nice you would never want to leave.)

The aroma of magnolias wafts upon a gentle breeze.
The forest is filled with nothing but magnolia trees.
A bright pinkish flower inside dark green leaves.
Magnolia Island is where my dream vacation will be.

A myriad of colorful wildlife the fragrant forests reveal.
Picturesque hamlet set beside a beautiful Crystal Lake.
Dining upon the tasty grilled trout for the evening meal.
This is an imaginative vacation that I really need to take.

The view of an unforgettably picturesque cascading waterfall,
On an island bordered by a breathtakingly stunning beach
Ripe coconuts hanging from green Coconut trees thirty feet tall
Relaxing to the sounds of jazz with a cold drink within reach.

Enjoying the fresh aroma of a burning Jamaican herbal cigar,
As an ocean breeze gently delivers relief from the tropical heat.
A bright white full moon slowly rises above the watery horizon.
Gather my things, to the comforts of my hotel suite I retreat.

(unfinished)
Copyright 2007
Reginald Levi Walker
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