trapped in the sky

when you feel like your sky has fallen
and your world no longer exists
it's just you
in a vacuum of poignant feelings

try to figure out the reasons
for the feelings inside
you don't know how or even why
but feel supressed like a cloudy sky

n then you stumble upon a happenstance
but time doesn't care that you fear a wrong turn
n so confusion sets in once again
as your moment of ecstacy flies away with the wind...

copyrighted 2007 renu

lovely

Shauna Leigh McCahill-Roy
*I am creating and living a life of my own choosing*

your poems are beautiful as well :o0 Our writing seems a bit similar. I added you to my buddy (?) list on here and look forward to reading more of your work. Shauna.

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