Dedicated to Debs.....They are many but so are we!
They are many, the mountains standing with clouds like jewelry that wraps around their every curve.
The murky waters whose ripples display a show featuring the 'devils dance'.
The howling breeze that forms the ripples strokes your spine and telling you secrets you never wanted to know.
The oddest shapes that follow your steps and that shatter every nerve.
They are many, the disfigured creations, the trees resemble men, but have no hearts.....only thoughts.......I drag myself to an opening, I see a light shining through.
I take one last look at this world that did not welcome.
I see they are many, too many all the same.
But when I step out of there I see many more like me.
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repenter,
this is first time I feel that; I do not really understand what do you mean.
I can understand it in more than one meaning.
ubuntu
ubuntu......
thats the point......this poem can mean many things, therefore, many ppl can relate to it in their own way.....Im glad it made u think ,hehehe.....thanks 4 the comment.......peace.
Dedication...
A big thankyou to you Repenter, for that kind dedication...though I have to admitt I got quite embarrassed when I saw my name up in big letters like that! lol!
I see that you have embraced the land of fantasy very well, and I especially like the first line that speaks of the jewelry and the other of the 'devils dance'
The disfiguration aspect is also very clever, as it is true reflection of man's distortion, or could it be that all nature is beautiful, but we only see what we allow ourselves to see? Im venturing off into Buddist Philosophy a bit now, so i'd better stop there!
Debs x
Debs.....thanks 4 the inspiation.....
thank u for taking the time to point out ur favourite lines....the lines u mentioned happen to be my fave too, however, reading my poem and then reading the pure brilliance of yours leaves mine looking a bit mmmmm not so skillfull.....oh well , we learn from eachother and I for one have learnt something from u today, so thanks again Debs...peace.
such lovely images...
for such a haunting place. I like your similes and metaphors. Very well done.
joyce
thank u joyce...
thanks 4 the kind comment....peace.