I can imagine heaven....
Who are we to imagine ,who are we to predict?
Who are we but mere creations that contradict?
Who's to say we'll even get there when we doubt the high Creator?
When we all leave our sins unrepented and leave our prayers for later!
If the word of God is spoken,
and we believe.
Then the gates are already open.
We must attempt to achieve.
Is not your body a sign good enough to swallow?
The shell in which we live, a shell our souls do borrow.
Paradise the place we dream upon.
Where pain and destruction will be forever gone.
We were made with a mind that cannot comprehend,
but that's the test of our trust in God that He does not pretend.
Believe that heaven is all it's promised to be,
for only when you believe,will you ever see.
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I Can Imagion Heaven
I liked the message andthe writing
hope I be there with a person who gave me the promise
Now no person knows what delights of the eye are kept hidden (in reserve) for them - as a reward for their (good) deeds.
Thanks repenter86
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Repenter,
I hope you do not take exception to what I have done but I have taken the opportunity to offer up a little editing advice to you:
Who are we to imagine , who are (we) to predict?
Who are we but mere creations that contradict?
Who's to say we'll even get there when we doubt the high Creator?
When we all leave are (our?) sins unrepented and leave our prayers for later!
If the word of God is spoken,
and we believe.
Then the gates are already open.
We must attempt to achieve.
Is not your body a sign good enough to swallow?
The shell in which we live in (remove this in), a shell our souls do borrow.
Paradise the place we dream upon.
Where pain and distruction (destruction) will be forever gone.
We were made with a mind that cannot comprehend,
but that’s (that’s) the test of our trust in God that He does not pretend.
Believe that heaven is all its (it’s) promised to be,
for only when you believe, will you ever see.
Write on,
Pete
thank you all for your comments....
your comments are much appreciated......Ergo.....your a star!....thank you soooo much for your advise.....I need someone to point these things out every now and then.....not making excuses or anything but believe me ,when I put the effort in Im quite good.hehehe......having a 2 yr old swinging out of your hair while you writing doesnt help of course hehehe.....thank you again and please dont hesitate to correct me in the future....I would grab the help with both hands.