Murderers and their waiting place.

shivering, aching and soaked in sin
sinking down with the memory of actions, words.
tied down safe from eyes of the mild,
watery grave so black and never ending
sleepy weeds that dance displaying no remorse.
deserved within a world unseen, this is the ending of just this one.
so many more to come.
so many lies undone.
so many wait in the sun.
for now it all seems fine and fun.
till they reunite with the gun.
the one they held and shot, that one.
and then they will share the grave of grief.
all their life they threw away,
the fact that they would die one day,
and meet their Lord and what He'll say,
and then all they know is gone and grey,
in their waiting place they'll stay,
wishing they'd lived every day,
with more than bad and hate to say,
but here they wait as they uncontrollably lay

rhyme

well that was interesting
you did very nice rhyme
thinks repenter,
Ubuntu

AND THANK U......

again, I appreciate ur kind comments as always.peace.

Some heavy thoughts

repenter,

That's some pretty sobering stuff you hit us with there. It is true for many of the despots and their mindless followers in so many parts of this vast and confusing world.

Pete

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