THE PEOPLES FRIENDS
He breathed in the smoke as he lay in shock
He held tight and firm to the last small rock
He prayed and then stood to assure his pride
Didn't care if he got hurt or died.
He was sick of the torment and the injustice of it all
He walked with a limp but stood sure and tall.
Before him parked a row of tanks
Soldiers in uniform in the lower ranks
He smiled and asked them to kindly leave
But they had no time to let him grieve.
They had just shot his uncle next door.
And he saw his wife laying dead on the floor.
He bit his lip as he begged his Lord
But they were busy so they cut the cord.
They shot through his body like there was no tomorrow
And went to the next house to continue the sorrow.
They raped and stole and killed them all
But none of us did hear their call.
We slept and snored while they were in hell
We stood high while they all fell.
We judge them as the bad, the wrong.
But we were the baddies all along.
Now she is hiding and holding her baby.
Will she survive? oooh! well maybe.
They'll just use her like a toy,
taking turns every soldier boy.
They will take her ring that she holds dear,
Then fill her heart with hate and fear.
Then they'll go back to their comfy dens,
and call themselves ''the peoples friends''.
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a million wonderous writes...
And all of this is true. and all of it will continue. for hate is our greatest game. and violence seems to be just so much fun. it seems to never want to end. this is what we have become.
Your words are so beautiful. They show me dailly why I am wrong
For all it's worth...
MUCH APPRECIATED!...
thanks for the kind comments and the poetic reply.....[sumthin about ya!]
very nice
this was very clever and well written
thank u....
thanks ubuntu.....I enjoyed writing it....I feel very passionate about this matter
yes
I think should to be enjoy when you writing this type of poem.
Thank you.
Picture of war
What you think about, you bring about.
How I hate war. It brings out the worst in people. Wars are caused because people don't love one another. How sad this picture is. Very good writing it evokes pain but very good not all art is pretty.
Debborah
thank u so much for commenting Debborah....
you are very right,not all art is pretty......sometimes I feel we all need a little reality check from time to time.....we cant just pretend like every thing is dandy in our cruel little world........war is just one of those things that shows mans true colours even in this day and age.....thanks again 4 commenting!
war sucks!!
WAR.....HUGH.......bum-bum.....what is it good for,absolutly nothing........lol sorry,don't know if you know the song or not but I gave it a shot lol.this was great,really smart and with good visuals...loved it!!
Ricklovin
thanks rick.....
and yeah....I do know that song hehehe.....thanks again 4 commenting.peace.
Brutality Captured
Repenter,
This piece was very sobering and extremely thought and guilt provoking. It is true that we often turn a deaf ear to the slaughter going on outside our guarded borders. It makes me angry and more than a bit ashamed.
Pete
thank u Pete............
Im glad you feel the same way and I really appreciate your proffesional comments............Its better to feel angry and ashamed than to not feel anything.........thanks again.peace.
Any Time Pal
Repenter,
You are surely welcome. I am here to read and heed!
Pete