WISE OLD LADY

wise old lady let me know,will I be alright?
can I achieve my goals and make my future bright?
will I find love and will peace find me?
will I stay blind or when can I see?
will I know when my soul has cried her last tear?
should I still feel bad bout what happened last year?
wise old lady with henna in your hair,
is there anything you can do to ease my dispair?
behind your eyes do you hide secrets of success?
remedies for pain and cures for distress?
say something old women,your silence is weary!
im becoming slightly nervous and somewhat teary.
I know what your thinking, that Im a drama queen?
or maybe Im making a fuss and a scene.
what is it? you stare like statued cat
stop this nonsense there no need for that!
whats this you hand me a bockedy stone.
Ive come here for this ?no wonder youre alone!
throw it?you say in your toothless way
well ok then,what can I lose at the end of the day?
wow!amazing ,a flying stone!
this is silly,I think Ill go home.
so what how it lands ,flung in the blowing sands
no I didnt predict it would land there
what is it I cant understand
your help is a little hard to bare!
whats this?a cup filled with water,
throw it you say mixed up with laughter
is this funny to you,as Im at my wits end
Ive come here for help,all you do is pretend.
your no wiser than a begging miser,I bet youve laughed at them all.
Im off, still sad and my mind looking bad as my hopes continue to fall.
Im walking away and I see a boy play
who is that silly women I inquire
without a care says theres no one in there,tells me Im a liar.

Rhyme

This is best rhyme I can read. is excellent, super, wonderful, outstanding and extraordinary.
I believe that the future will be bright, and you wont be a drama queen any more.
Thanks for this poem, I like it a lot.
take care,,

thanx for your words...

your words are kind and much appreciated,God bless you;]

excellent

i loved this, funny yet at the same time i could sense her frustrations in seeking what was just not being revealed to her. surprise ending too! great rhyme!-mona-

Thanx mona...

your kind words are much appreciated;]

This poem is fascinating.

This poem is fascinating. Sometimes it may be hard to know where to go for advice, and sometimes the best advice is the advice that isn't given. Good write. I see good things for your future.

why thank you madam...

i hope my future can offer me brighter days than ive had so far ;]

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