BLAME IT ON HER
I so hate this feeling,but it
makes me wanna write..
This feeling keeps me awake,it
makes it hard to sleep at night..
I can't get a hold of it,
it has total control..
I wanna put it behind me,but
it keeps eating at my soul..
sorrow..
such sorrow..
I wouldn't wish this feeling,
on anybody,cept for one..
So she can feel what I feel,
and pay for what she's done..
You could say thats not very nice,
or even say that im vindictive..
But im just a simple man,and these
feelings are simply instinctive..
So don't freaking judge me man,and
right now I dont care if you relate..
Sorry for lashing out,but I've had
just about all that I can take..
Guess all these feelings im having,
are somehow mixed with hate..
But please,don't blame me,blame the
crazy bitch that used to be my mate..
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Rick
Hey, You're only human Rick lovin". This is all part of growing and especially learning. im a big believer in "things happening for a reason"
And there is always something good, that comes out of a bad situation!
great write
Linda
you're right
but maybe its been delayed somehow cause aint to many good things happen lately lol.....thanks for the love.....Ricklovin
nice!
dont u just love when u let it out like that!
I actually grinned while reading this cuz there is some1 I feel the same bout....I never had the guts 2 write bout it though....thanx 4 the inspiration.
I do love it
that's how I do,I get it all out on paper...it feels good afterwards,and hopefully when im done its something worth reading lol....im happy you like it...by the way if it did inspire you,then let it all out bro,and let me know when its done,I'd like to read it....thanks again bro.....Ricklovin
hehe....im not ur bro....im ur sista....
im actually a lil lady myself and I will definatly write a sweet hate poem in honor of ur inspiration 2 me,its sumthin i wanted 2 do 4 ages....keep an eye out for my write and let me know what u think plz...thnx
wow,sorry
im always being accused of assuming,I think they might be right about that lol..guess the name threw me off a lil...i'll be looking for the poem...I have another one but its alot worse,very personal,and I kind of rip her a new one lol....but I won't be posting that one...im so psyched I inspired you to write something,that's pretty kool lol...can't wait to read it.....(ツ)ヴbye sis....Ricklovin
hehehe...I would so luv 2 see that...
I wud so luv 2 see that personal poem just cuz u mentioned it now...but I understand that some poems are 4 the beholders eyes only.
anyway ,I did post that poem a short time ago so whenever ur ready 2 read it....however its no where near as gud as urs...thnx 4 the reply.
Toss It All In A Sack
Rick,
Toss all of this shit in a sack, tie a freakin rock around the sack, get on a boat and motor out to the deepest water you can find and then dump the sack full of shit. Wash your hands, clear you mind and fuckin get on with it. That's all you can do man.
Pete
luved it...
its deffo one of my favourites ;-)
your words are so strong and full of meaning ..i luv it :)
and, well..if she is a "crazy bitch" then i say, let her kno it
your poem has such meaning and although i dont really kno why you hate her so much, i can tell theres a pretty good reason to. lol.
snuggly bug.x.x.
don't really hate her
just some old pent up feelings I've had that lately have been turning up for some reason...to be honest its about my kids mom....I wish her all the best really,so don't take this one to literally ok lol...thanks snuggs for reading and the comments,always apreciated....Ricklovin
ok
sorri, it just sounded as if u hated her guts or something but i think its gud that u wish her all the best ;)
u got kids? man, thats kewl- i bet ya luv em 2 death huh-> sorry that seems so nosey i just luv kids ..lol
snuggly bug .x.x.
wow
it is frickin awsome!!! Hate and anger can become buety and soul in the right hands. You have defantily made buety and soul.
awww
I don't know about beauty,but for sure it has some soul lol...thanks for the nice comment,I really do apreciate it....Ricklovin
I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO WRITE
I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO WRITE WHEN ANGRY,THIS POEM IS GOOD.HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER
thanks
thank you mimi....I do feel better....Ricklovin
this poem is awsome!
the way you write is so simple yet so clever and creative all at the same time. i think that makes it more powerful. i can't even rhyme but i think you do it very well. and this one is a fun read! i really liked it.
thanks jezza
I guess my poems are pretty simple...I'd love to be able to write some of the poems I find here,they seem to require alot of deep thought,but that just isn't me,im a simple kind of guy lol...thanks again for reading and leaving the nice comment,i apreciate it alot....Ricklovin