I KNOW ITS LOVE

I find that what i feel for her
is truely profound...
The timbre of her voice to me is
simply the sweetest sound...
I can still smell her scent flowing
gently through the air...
I can still feel how my fingers had felt
as i ran them through her hair...
How much do i love her,must i
really count the ways...
Her lips pressed against mine is what
had kept me in a daze...
I know im in love,im sure its not
just some type of faze...
I know ill be in love with her til the
very end of all my days...

OMG

omg this is so cute and adorable. i love it so fricken much!! good job. keep writing. good imagery. i really felt like i do when m bf does that to me
can you criticism mine
lynz

thanks cliche

I really apreciate that you read and liked it so much..I haven't been writing that long just a few months but I love doing it..thanks again for the kind words....Ricklovin

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