I NEVER THOUGHT
I never thought that you
and I would ever part...
You said I was your love,
you said I had your heart..
Early on we had our gripes,and
I know I caused you pain..
I never wanted it to be this way,
but ist all gone down the drain..
When we started over,I did any
and everything to please you..
Problem was,that it was to late,
you just wanted someone new..
Over and over I did what I could,
and tried to plead my case..
You would have none of it,and
said that I have been replaced..
Now you go from man to man,
in search of god knows what..
It seems you don't even care,
just as long as you bust a nut..
You had several chances,to have
what you say you always wanted..
All the choices you have made,I
know they'll leave you haunted..
In the end,I know i'll be happy,to
bad that it won't be with you..
I never thought that we would
part,but sadly,I bid you adieu..
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I can relate to this poem,
I can relate to this poem, only from a woman's POV. Very nice poem.
thanks
thanks M.D,can I call you M.D,to late,I already did lol...so you can relate huh,its sad,its about my kids mom,I had messed up alot early on and when I changed it was to late,now she's all over the place...its crazy how people change for the worst sometimes...well thanks for reading and commenting,I apreciate it!!!!!! Ricklovin
Lessons learned
It is a shame that when we need to learn the one lesson that might be needed to keep us happy we learn it way to late. It does not seem to matter if we are a man or a women. Only that the lesson is always learned to late I am glad you learned yours but sorry to here she has not learned hers may it be before it is to late.
it is isn't it
It is sad,cause she hasn't learned it yet...and im afraid she won't!! all the choices she's making are horrible,and what's worse is that she knows it!! But,what can you do,im just glad this old dog learned some new tricks...thanks again for reading and for the love....Ricklovin
Rick~
New tricks eeh? *giggle* Great poem Rick. Too bad for her...seems as if you're pretty popular with the lady-folk ‘round here (especially a particular redheaded poet). Take what you’ve learned and keep your head high!!!!
Nell
P.S. Never stop writing!!! It’s just one of your many great qualities.
thanks nell
thank you so much nell,you're really sweet..hmmmm I wonder who that redhead could be lol...I won't stop writing,whether im good or bad at it lol...thanks for reading nell,muuuuah....Ricklovin
love it
i hate it when we say all these things to each other like " you have my heart" or "only you" and then the feelings just change and it turns to" not you,anyone else" where do i promises go? she is making a mistake.she will not find what she is looking for with all those men.she will be abck, im sure! but dont take her back! lol!
love it
i hate it when we say all these things to each other like " you have my heart" or "only you" and then the feelings just change and it turns to" not you,anyone else" where do i promises go? she is making a mistake.she will not find what she is looking for with all those men.she will be abck, im sure! but dont take her back! lol!