I WANT TO F*%K YOU
I want to make hot,wet,passionate
love to you in the worst of ways..
Want to make you cum so much,that
your legs will be trembling for days..
I want to feel me inside of you while
looking straight into your eyes...
I want to lick up all the jucies,that'll
be trickeling down your inner thighs...
I want to have you ride me,I'll pull you
in,and whisper I love you in your ear...
You will know the meaning of exstacy,
once I've taken you from the rear...
If given the chance,id make love to you
til the wee hours of the morning...
I'd have need for nothing at all,simply
your naked body for the exploring...
Once you've been with me,on your lonely
nights,i'll be the person you most crave..
So when ever your good and ready,i'll be
waiting,as your one and only sex slave...
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oky doky then
well that was mmmm....interesting? oh I dont know, at least you can rhyme:]
ok I guess
I don't know how to take this comment,if anything I guess I should thank you for reading it at least..
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finally....a guy writing about having sex.....in "a guy kind of way"... but still....LOL!
I love it Ricklovin'....but then again, you knew I would....
~~~phew~~~~~~~
Linda
lol,glad you liked it linda.
thanks linda...yeah I noticed the difference,yours is really sensual,mines I guess is a bit more to the point huh lol...who knows maybe we can make poetry together lol...thanks again linda...
RICKLOVIN'.....
yes, yours is to the point, but thats the way guys are... very ~visual~....just like your poem! LOL!
i just read it again,....and.... aga...i...n !!!!
I like..
Linda
ahaaa
over and over again lol,kool..thanks linda,you're freaking kool...
lol
Good poem i guess it portrays well how men think of sex. i find it amusing.
You have a blunt look on things which i think is cool.
fiona
hey
that's not it at all,I really am a sensitve,romantic type of guy,but,I was definately feeling a certain way when I wrote this lol..I like slow passionate love making as well,but sometimes you just wanna go to town if ya know what I mean lol..anyway thanks for reading and leaving a comment,I apreciate it!!! Ricklovin
wow!
wow! i loved it. raw and passionate.just the way i like it. hot! lol!-mona-
lol
im really glad you liked it,yeah that's what I was aiming for,raw and hot lol...thanks again mona..Ricklovin
OMG I FUCKING LOVE IT
DAMN WOW OMG thats was real fucking good that shit got me hot good poem rick
gracia
lol,thanks alot,im glad you liked it...
I want to
Damm now why in the hell can't I meet a man like you (the entire picture which works well for me mind you) oh well you do so have a great way with words.
really?
well im in the bronx,if youre ever in the area lol...I don't think there's many men like me out there,I like to think im one in a million or billion lol....thanks for reading and showing me some love,I really apreciate the comments.......Ricklovin
All I can say to that one
All I can say to that one is...DAMN! I LIKE IT! Must go take a shower now!! I don't care if it was written from a "man's point of view" it was still HOTT!!! Great job! Now see if you can write one with MORE visuals......
lmao
I was asked to do that by someone else to..A friend of mine started all that,she wrote a few of em like that but from a females perspective,more senual and visual..so I wrote that one,soon after everbody was writing sex poems lol..i'll write one like that soon,so watch for it,just trying to switch things up for now..you can check out "lets take a peak",I think you'll like that one to...thanks for reading and commenting..Ricklovin
P.S Enjoy that shower!!
I did read "Let's take a
I did read "Let's take a peak"! I liked that one as well! That is why I asked for more!! Oh and trust me, I WILL enjoy my shower now!! LOL. I will also be watching for more