IN THE DARK
Im sitting in the dark,
im feeling so alone..
Love has lost its spark,
reasons still unknown..
Blackness all around me,
consuming all but thought..
The silence here astounds me,
losing all that I have sought..
Im sitting in the dark,
still feeling so alone..
As she puts the car in park,
she's wishing I wasn't home..
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Rick
I can feel your pain in this poem. This is a good way to let it all out. Keep on writing. This poem took me into your lonliness for a moment.
Nice write
Linda
thanks linda
but I have to tell you,im really not that lonely,lol...just felt like writiing something lol....im learning I don't have to be all depressed to write..check out my next one,hope it makes ya smile....Ricklovin
Rick...
Im so glad you arent sad....wow, you can really get yourself into it and write. nice!
Linda
Oh…this is good.
Oh…this is good. You create emotion so masterfully. Nice write.
thanks
thanks madam,your way,way to kind lol...Ricklovin
sad
i hate that point in relationships when everything gets so dark and its like you become these different people who cant stand each other.its a terible death...
I know huh
I hate it too.even if I've ended a relationship on good terms,its still always really hard on me..that's what I get for having a big heart...but its all good..I take my licks and keep movin forward...thanks mona...Ricklovin
nice poem especially the
nice poem especially the fifth and sixth line
thanks mimi
thanks mimi..sorry it took so long for me to reply,I haven't been on the site in a long while...just haven't felt like writting lately....thanks for reading and the comment....Ricklovin