IS THIS IT
Is this really it,is this
what its all about..
A life full of emptyness,
a heart full of doubt..
There has to be more to
it,it can't be all like this..
Must be something I can't see
or something that I missed..
Will it ever get any better,
will I ever have my chance..
The song just keeps on changing
But i nolonger want to dance..
life has been so hard,and its
made me so damn bitter..
Sometimes I feel like ending it,
but you'd just call me a quitter..
One day i'll find my way,I hope
that it doesn't take to long..
In the mean time i'll be here,
singing the same old songs..
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Rick
Sometimes it feels like "thats all there is" but then something good can happen 2 minutes fom now to brighten things up....
I can tell you are a good person with a big heart.
good things will come!
you gotta believe....the red sox did...
Linda
thanx
I woke up today feeling really bummed,but that lil comment about the sox made me smlie lol,thank you linda...woo woo...Ricklovin
i identify
i love your poetry.i identify so much with the feelings in most of them, because they are feelings i have had at some point, even this one.keep up the good writing.its deep!
thank you
doesn't it suck to feel this way?I hate it...thanks so much for the kind words mona,its comments like these that make it easy and a joy to keep writing.you guys made my day,thanks again....Ricklovin
Good Stuff!!!
Every day is most definitely a new day. Stay in the now and leave the past behind. Learn from it but don't live in it. You are a great writer. Don't ever sell yourself short.
Love your work!!!
Yours Truly
P.S. You should think about switching radio stations if you're hearing the same song over and over...lol.
you're so cute
thanks nell,it really means alot to me that you would say such nice things to me.....thank you......and I love your work also,but I especially like that one that's almost like a song..its really good....Ricklovin
wow!....
this was amazing rick!
the way you worded everything was just perfect and the story behind it is one that many can relate to [including me]
especially loved this bit:-
Will it ever get any better,
will I ever have my chance..
The song just keeps on changing
But i nolonger want to dance..........nice write!
thanks
thank you so much repenter..I thought that line was sweet to lol..thanks for reading and for the comment...I apreciate it alot,I've been getting alot of love lately,feels good ya know lol....thanks again repenter...Ricklovin
writing helps a lot, Rick
I've felt like that a lot, but since I started writing here on the site I feel better about life. There are a lot of nice people here, and they care. Thanks for sharing your feelings, things do get better as life goes along - I've found opening myself up to possibilities (like writing) really helps!
Very nice poem. (the line about no longer wanting to dance is beautifully poignant.)
Joyce
you're right
thanks and you're right,it does help alot,and you're right about the people on this site....they've been really nice,im glad I found this poetry site...made a few good friends so far which is the last thing I expected when I first got here...anyway thanks again joyce for reading and leaving me such a nice comment...now don't be a stranger ok......Ricklovin