ITS ALL IN MY MIND
Recently I've been in a
confused state of mind.
My heart playing tricks on me,
and my eyes have gone blind.
Blind to the facts that always
stare me right in the face.
Emotions running wild,can
be easily displaced.
Searching for that old love,but
not finding a single trace.
Think you've moved forward,but find
yourself stuck in the same place.
At times you forget who you are,and lose
sight of the person you'd like to become.
As the walls come crashing down,and
your life seems to come undone.
You feel like you're trapped in a
corner,with no place left to run.
Then you realize its not even close to
being over,another day has just begun.
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Great
I enjoyed this Rick.Love the last two lines.
Gloria
thanks
thanks a bunch gloria,im glad you enjoyed it and I really apreciate the love....Ricklovin
aaaw man....
chin up brov....ur hurting real bad right now, I can tell......believe it or not.....peace will come.....and if u never felt pain then you would never know peace when it comes....u just hang in there cuz ur worth more than just hitting the low place we all squirm to get out of.....I love the way you write to release, better technique then some guys I know who'd prefer to smash someones face....peace.
thanks sis
you know its funny,I was once one of those guys that you mentioned..good thing I have poetry!!! im ok though,thanks for always showing some concern,its very sweet of you and others here on the site..you guys are the best!!! peace. Ricklovin
So True
'When we lose sight of the people we want to become.'..i really echo Repenter's words and hope for you the depression passes swift. When i happens to me..i say it's just a temporal thing, and it will pass. Really well expressed Rick and i'm glad you don't want to smash anyone's face in! lol!
Debs
thank you so much
im feeling alot better now.and don't worry,I won't smash anyones face in lol.thanks for reading and the comment debs,its always apreciated!!!
Ricklovin
what's nice about new days, Rick...
is they bring with them chances for a new beginning. My best remedy for love sickness was to go out dancing with someone new - I'm not much of a dancer, but it sure makes you feel alive and joyful! Good luck to you, Rick, everyone cares about you here!
joyce
awwwwwwww
that's very sweet of you to say joyce thanks...by the way,im a pretty good dancer..maybe i'll show you some moves one day lol..thanks for reading and the super nice comment.
Ricklovin
dear ricklovin
wow, this is really good. i know exactly where you are coming from too. just hang in...i know thats easy for me to say, but you'll get over this hump.
and i agree with the rest ...you write very expressively. thats a good thing to help it get out.
great write rick
Linda
thanks linda
its nice to know some people out there like my poems,especially since I think you all are so talented,it means alot me.you guys are all so cool,I really apreciate the kindness shown to me from all of you..you guys are pretty bad ass lol.
Ricklovin
rick this is a great
rick this is a great piece...isn't it funny how such beauty comes out of so much pain...hang on my friend...
yes
I totally agree mimi,100%...I'd just rather be happy all the time lol...thanks for showing some love mimi...Ricklovin