ON OUR WAY HOME
By: lroconnell and Ricklovin
Ok babe,so what about this spot,
we're alone,and im feeling kinda hot.
We'll do it right here,im ready to start,
just say the word,i'll put her in park..
Its nice and dark,theres no one around,
soon as you're ready,it can go down.
Yeah, stop the car, push back the seat,
God, can you believe our body heat?
My mind is scheming and my bodys ripe,
nobody knows it, but youre so my type.
I’m craving you, and I want it raw,
go ahead reach over,and rip off my bra.
I want you so bad its enough to hurt,i'll
rip off your bra,and tear off that skirt.
Im kissing your neck,I know it feels good,
my cock is erect,its harder than wood.
I reach for your breasts,soft and so supple,
one isn't enough,thank god their a couple.
My nipples are reacting and look so edible
They graze your lips, and feel so incredible
Your mouth it gropes, with a sucking reaction
So softly I’m moaning, with satisfaction.
my hands sliding down to your crotch to unzip,
and I feel this need to suck on your dick.
Yeah babe pull it out,you know its all yours,
go ahead and spit on it,your my lil whore.
I grab hold of your hair,I like control you see,
love when you do it while you're looking at me.
Feel so damn good,in and out it slides,so
tell me babe are you ready for this ride?
We push back the seats to get plenty of
room,the sex in the air is like body perfume.
You're laying back and i climb way on top
it slides right in,I'm not planning to stop.
This f~e~e~l~s so good, keep fucking me baby
now turn me on over and please dont say maybe.
I turn you around and I start eating it out,
I slip it back in as you moan and you shout.
Slowly I pick up the pace,you watch as i stroke,
watch it disappear,without mirrors or smoke.
On the verge of erupting its driving me crazy,
I lean in and whisper,now come for me baby.
Gasping for breath and baby i'm bothered and hot
harder and f..faster now,it's just the righ..h..t spot.
You're swelling up inside of me just right
give it all to me now, "fuck" it feels tight.
Im losing my mind,you're about to explode my
lips find their way down and I suck off your load.
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wow
This is awesome, my gf would love to ready this~ but really thou~ well express!!
thanks
thanks wolfy,im glad you liked it..hope you gf likes it to,thanks for reading and the comment!!!
Ricklovin
Hey Ricklovin'....
I like what we did...not bad for our first joint effort!!!
It sounds so good.
Linda
:*)
BOTH OF YOU
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
have got to take a cold shower, i can smell the musk from here !!!
linda have you swallowed yet and rick her bra is on the side car door mirror hahahaha
great job you two
aces
ron
lmao
that's funny,honestly I needed the shower after I read her last stanza lol,she's so good at the visuals isn't she?..thanks for reading and for the funny comment ron,we both apreciate it im sure..
Ricklovin
I agree
I love it,I think its pretty good if I must say so myself lol.it was fun to write with you,we have to do it again sometime! Ricklovin
Bravo!
This is one of the hottest poems I've ever read! Very erotic to say the least!
And I especially liked how this was told from both sides.
Your stanzas and her stanzas flowed together
naturally...without ever missing a beat.
Outstanding!
DEAR man TJ!!!
Thank you so much...so nice of you to say to both of us...
I really like the "bad boy" image he gives off to me ...he's so hot in this poem....
i appreciate the commnets tj
:*)
Linda
How about a threesome...
How about a threesome next time guys...
That’s it baby… come on and get into the grove
I like the way you shake it... I like the way you move
You make me feel so good… it feels so soothing
Oh My God, OH MY GOD… The car... it is moving
Hold on real tight …because we are in for a thrill
We are picking up speed as we move down the hill :)
Ray AKA Yobarney
OMG RAYMOND
you totally make me laugh so much! you are crazy!!!
sex and humor...a nice mix!
thanks for the comments...
a threesome??? hmmm....
Linda
You should have worn your safety belts
You should have worn your safety belts... Always practice safe sex!
I never felt you so hard… I love it when you lift
Baby that is not me… you’re on the stick shift
Whatever it is… It feels good in my rump
Don’t stop… Don’t stop… Just hit another bump
I think we’re in second… I’m going to shift it into High
Oh my God… Oh My God … What a way o die
Ray AKA Yobarney
lmao
linda is right ray,you're a funny dude.whatever it is feels good in my rump,that's hilarious lol,thanks for reading and the funny comment!
Ricklovin